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Reviewer: ionflame Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

Loving this story so far. I know you've probably already wrote the next chapter but I'm rooting for patty not to find her. Instead, let's have some unaware sex. That's always interesting to see an author write about.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

I definitely can't wait for more, good start.

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

I am likeing this story alot.  I would love to read about how Mary survives in the shoe.  I already cant wait to read the next chapter. 

Reviewer: TheDARGX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

Great start! Can't wait to see chapter 2!

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