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Reviewer: Texasisntreal Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Was this written in 3rd person or 1st person perspective? It gets confusing "He, I. I, he"

Also, don't you think Emma would notice that her friend who was going to live with them didn't show up in the 5 days he was actually there? (that's just something that caught my attention)

Reviewer: timmoomoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Who doesn't crap for two days??? Jeez is she constipated or something? She on a strict diet of only bananas

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