[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 3:42 PM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
Very good!
I am looking forward to continued ...
Farts would be cool.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I'll see what I can do.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2015 9:59 AM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
Even if that white-haired girl _is_ behind the other disappearances, what does Jason have to confess to; being a cheapskate? Lexi already knew that. But, what if Lexi is the one who has to confess something, in order to break his spell? Like, say, the name of the other boyfriend Michelle alluded to before the abrupt (and somewhat obvious) change of subject.
Author's Response:
I'm glad my story has created enough intrigue for people to hypothesize the outcome, thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 22 2015 6:31 PM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
When the white girl said "Come find me" it reminded me of a scene from the movie "Edge of tommoorow".
If you took it from that movie, then I applaud you, becuase it fits perfectly with this story. While the main character is with Lexi, there is this hidden backstory of when he first shrunk.
If there is no food in my house and I had to hide a tiny person, I would just go drive thru. Seems a bit easier than eating at a restaurant.
Michelle seems like witch. The way she muttered something and soon, all the boys got covered in soda.
Michelle is probably grossed out by what she saw Lexi do. I mean, she used a tissue to wipe her face and she sees something from the tissue fell into her soup. Then Lexi wants to try Michelle's soup, and she scoops up the object to her mouth. Michelle is either grossed out or used to it since its Lexi.
At this rate, I think that Lexi will lose her control on him. It just seems bound to happen. However, her playful and silly attitude allows her to cover her mistakes without people raising suspicion.
This carelessness by Lexi could be risky, but it sure makes others not suspect her of anything fishy. (Besides her breath right now.)
No need to apologize for an absence. Everyone has summer plans. Just upload when you get the time to do it.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for catching the reference haha. And Michelle didn't see Jason falling from Lexi's tissue, Lexi simply wanted to avoid Michelle accidentally swallowing her companion. Glad you enjoy it!
Date: July 22 2015 3:07 PM Title: Lexi's Big Mouth
I would think that her morning breath would be more pungent than of the fresh shrimp XP. Really glad to see some mouthplay after that preview of her breath we got last chapter. Totally looking forward to the rest of the story.
I wonder if the guy Lexi is crushing on is Jason, hmm. How does that saying go? "The way to a man's heart is throught your stomach" or something?
Seriously though, love the great presentation of the friendly/careless slob giantess and the variety of situations. Personally hoping she doesn't spit him out right away (or brush later XD) but I'll keep reading either way.
Author's Response:
Nice speculation, and thanks for the review! Of the four main female characters I've written, carelessness has been a part of three to fuel the unaware scenes, so I'm glad you like that trait. And her putting him in her mouth was really only to prevent Michelle from seeing him, also to get some mouthplay. I don't plan on having Lexi swallow my main character :).