I agree, the bowl idea was very creative.

Jason got a mini pool inside a bigger one. I thought it would have been even better if Jason's bowl was like a ship, and Lexi would act like a monster trying to flip the boat(bowl) over.

That shower scene was amusing, and very realistic unlike most shower scenes in most stories.

The hair whip happens all the time and people rarely use it, so I'm glad you used it. It also is a good cause for an unaware scene.

Also, Lexi probably scrubbed her butt harder than other places because she probably was planning on playing with Jason with it. So it made sense that Jason falls off the soap and gets trapped in her underwear.

I would like to see Lexi drop Jason in the front of her panties soon as well. She sure is playful.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks again for the great review! I try to write my characters as realistically as possible, and almost never do I write with the main character having a gts fetish. And actually, while Lexi is a very playful character, she doesn't intend to torture Jason. Sure she teases him, but all the major stuff like him falling in the back of her bikini bottom is gonna be unaware, because it's not really a realistic urge for her to shove him up her ass. Also, I don't plan on doing insertion, it's not a category I'm personally fond of, and I can't see Lexi, as a character, completely ignoring her friend and doing something like that for her own pleasure.