Reviews For Training Day
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Reviewer: DCDC420 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 6:28 PM Title: Stretch

I don't think you should have split this story up into chapters, but other than that I liked it. There was a bit of word repetition, but a lot better than plenty of other stories on here.

 

Also, I wholeheartedly approve of more giant blonde tomboys.

 



Author's Response:

I need to go back and re-word all of my stories someday.

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