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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

How much you want to bet the three of them will have a ménage a trois "cum" Sunday night?

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

This story is so much win! I just got through it all and it is really good!

Alex and Addy have this flirty, kiddish, attitude to them both and they both seem like real people. And I'm really digging the perspective shifting. To be honest, I like the Addy chapters better, something about her character and "squeee!" attitude towards Alex and inner thoughts really hit home with me.

That's saying something too since I'm a dude and generally prefer the male perspective in these stories, so it's a testemant to how well the writting in this is coming along!

Consider me a regular from now on!

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Looking forward to it!  Should be "steamy" indeed :)

I also like the addition of another ascended in the cast.  Might she play a larger role?  At least now you have her as a secondary in case you want to go that route.  A double date at some point in the future could be an awesome way to show gender dynamics outside of one-on-one. 

Great work, I'm really digging their easy relationship.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

  Oh my, a jacuzzi scene is coming! It's great to see them enjoying each other's company so much and now to take it to the next level, the sweetness of their relationship is not saccherine at all!

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