Date: April 22 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Exceptionally well-done. I find it challenging to write using second-person point of view but you did an excellent job. The whole idea of a person transformed into a condom and treated like an object (literally) is wonderfully fascinating. Oh, and I love the telepathic connection that the giant has with that condom.
Late response FTW. Thank you! second-person is way out of my depth, but I figured I would give it a go. (I just put out a similar piece, also in second-person). Glad you enjoyed, and glad I am not the only one who finds it fascinating!