Really am enjoying this story. Your writing is very relaxed with no tension to it (except where it's needed), keep it up!

Wow I am really liking this plot line. Can't wait to see what Juliet does to him once he reveals his identify. My only caveats, work on spelling and grammar. Those two are what can make or break a story. Honestly when I am scrolling through the story feed if a story has bad grammar I don't even read it. Also be more decrepitive with your writing, we as readers want more detail into the lives of the characters. I know it is very easy to be brief when you are writing a story and are inspired. Just take your time and make sure each chapter is a finished masterpiece. Overall can't wait for more, very promising indeed.

Author's Response:

Spelling is something that is beoming more important to me as I add more chapters, I've begun proofreading each chapter as I finish it, and editing chapters that I've already submitted because I'm a bit of a perfectionist, I have been slowing down to be careful about how I write things, as for description, I try to give some description, but not too much I like to leave some unimportant details for the reader to decide. As for Juliet and Gan, well, you'll just have to read to find out.