Reviews For Love Bite
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Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2015 2:23 AM Title: All’s Fair in Love and War

very good!

I'm looking forward to more stories.

More Acrecente digestion (body dissolving until feces).



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 11:57 PM Title: All’s Fair in Love and War

Really nice seeing it came to a happy ending for everyone, well mostly everyone :3 Really like how it came out in the end. There were a few minor things which I would had seen different, but that's not me to criticis about. The ending was a bit short played out, especially it would had made more sense Simon asking of what happened to Bobby. I loved how Tommy seemed to get a boner of hearing his gf digesting haha :3



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I wasn't able to make it too long cause i had to balance my college, work, and trying to get somethign special for my gf for Valentine's Day, but next time if you could please go into detail on what was actually wrong to justify your lower rating, that would be great! Just so that I know what I need to work on so I can write better chapters and endings!

Reviewer: Prodi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 11:37 AM Title: All’s Fair in Love and War

A great ending for a great story. I love your work and am really looking forward to your next story.

I have to admit, for a moment, I really thought Tommy would die and feared this could be the last story of your series. So glad he and Simon survived :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it and thank you for the five star rating!

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