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Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 9:25 AM Title: Sophia's Play Time

Cool stuff! I like how she talks to the planet as she's doing stuff. Here's an idea: what if to get around the bad taste of future planets, she puts salt or food or something on it to make them taste better? Just a thought. I'll be patiently awaiting the next chapter...



Author's Response:

Sounds like an interesting idea, to use food and spices to dull the bad taste. I might go with this idea in the future. 

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