Reviews For The Elite 50
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Reviewer: CarlWilkerson Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 4:57 PM Title: Let's destroy them together!

Okay so, the part where the planet becomes one millimeter big really facinated me, because that would mean one single skin cell would be almost as big as the entire grand canyon. I don't know if you know the Oregon Trail, which is around 4000 km long, but the width of a single wrinkle on one of the fingers of the girls is as long as that, and 10 times as deep and wide as the grand canyon. Like damn, that's really small. It would take an average human 24 years to travel the diameter of a nipple. And it would take 62 years of non stop swimming to cover the length of one sweaty foot, and 39 years to 'swim' around a greasy anus.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2016 5:09 AM Title: The Tomboy Gets Her Revenge

  Soo glad you finished this! I will start off by saying I thought it seemed a little rushed the closer it got to the end, but overall I really really liked this story. The Planet Count sticking around to the end was a nice touch. Mass-shrinking micro stories always have my interest because the events of the story can affect literally billions of people, but remain a mystery to "the rest" of the world. It really makes me wonder, if an ordinary person were in the situation that these girls were in and they could do whatever they wanted with no one possibly knowing, would they behave as they always have? Or would they reveal a totally new due to the circumstances? Your story is a good example of this, and the sad fact that these shrunken-planet stories are so few makes me like this story even more.

  Anyway, I hope you keep writing, either another story in this genre, another story involving Raquel and friends somehow, or just whatever the hell you feel like writing. I'm glad you stuck with this story to the end like you said you would. You're pretty good at stories on the micro-planet scale, and that's something you don't see that much.


Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2016 1:10 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Alright, appreciate the update and I am willing to wait if it guarantees a strong and epic finish to a great story!

If you need ideas though, I'm still standing by my very first comment of more nipple insertion/possible lactation action! Also, perhaps the last planet or micro survivors aren't actually destroyed but are just left permanently doomed inside the depths of one of the girls bodies, I imagine that would make for a much more epic ending than another quick wipeout.


Just suggestions I was thinking off the top of my head, hopefully you make more stories similar to this one after you clear your writer's block! You're an awesome author and I would love to see more works like this from you in the future!

Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 3:42 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Hopefully you give us an amazing conclusion to this epic story, I've been periodically checking for the past few months waiting for another chapter! Thank you again!

Author's Response:

Sorry about falliing behind on this. I have been busy with other stories and collages and sadly I lost some interest in this story, but I hope to get the nerve again to finish off the last 2-3 chapters.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2015 3:34 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge



Reviewer: TarTar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10 2015 4:59 AM Title: Susan's Foot Massage

Really looking forward to the next chapter, especially after that cliffhanger!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I am currently working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2015 1:24 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Where is the rest? x)

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 10:13 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge


Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 11:56 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge


Glad that you're still making more chapters, I'm always checking every week or so to see if there's new stuff added to it! Just wanted to say again that you're a great writer and this story is Grade A in my book!

Author's Response:

Thanks a ton for your kind words. I will continue to try hard and add more chapters until this story ends.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2015 2:23 AM Title: From Germ to Giantess

Darn door bell!

I like how Raquel just grabs a planet and tosses it in her mouth like no big deal haha.

As always, looking forward to the future chapters! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I am already starting on the next chapter and I hope to bring it out soon.

Reviewer: GTS-Langley Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 9:40 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

To be honest, I made an account just to say THANK YOU for creating a masterpiece for us readers to enjoy. Although I am generally a ass and insertion guy, I really enjoy reading your story even though it is mostly feet and vore.

Style- 5/5

Story- 5/5

Authors AWESOMENESS - 10/5

Take your time if it means that the quality of the chapter is higher. I will look forward to read your other stories! CHEERS

Author's Response:

WOW! I am at a lost for words on how much I appreciate your kind post. I am sorry there is not a lot of insertion or ass play. They are not my strong points, but I really should expand on those things to please more than my feet and vore audience. I am glad you are enjoying the story so far and hopefully my future chapters. I already have two chapters in mind where insertion and ass play will take place, hopefully I will do it well enough to please the audience looking forward to those things.

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 6:40 PM Title: From Germ to Giantess

Wow. This was just- WOW!

And thanks for not letting this die.

Author's Response:

Thanks a ton for this comment. I am glad that you liked this chapter and I will continue to push forward until this story reaches it's conclusion, granted it might take a while, but I will give my loyal readers an ending and not let the story die prematurely. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 5:24 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Another superb update. Looking forward to the next one!

I'd personally like to see more planets and inhabitants survive longer - I love the idea in this chapter of thousands of people surviving amongsr the damo fibres of a girl's sock or between her toes, and previously entirr landmasses adhering to the snot and hairs in a girls's nose as she goes about her day to day life. Maybe a couple planets could be strategically placed, then shrunk to being to small to see and even forgotten about?


Also would love some butt stuff. The idea of a planet fitting neatly into a girl's anus before being snapped by it's contraction is amazing. Could even have the tiny germs live on in the wrinkles around the hole, and perhaps on the walls inside...

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I would allow some of the planets and inhabitants to survive, but I can't for story purposes, since the girls fear the Elite 50 making contact with any normal sized people who could help them, so they want to get rid of them all with no survivors. Yet I do like the living on the wrinkles idea, it might be something I include during my next story.

I hope the next chapter will be up to your liking and that you continue to give it your support, once again thanks for the comment. I love to hear what the readers think of the chapter and what they think I should include to make the story better. Some ideas will be included in this current story while other ideas will be a driving force in my future stories.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 12:23 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge


Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 12:56 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Thank you for the update, can't wait for more feet feet feet. Please talk about feet sweat, the smell and the toes. This is gonna be good. Why don't you post this on giantess city?

Author's Response:

Feet is my favorite subject when it comes to giantess stories, so as a fellow feet lover I will try to make the next chapter a feet fanatics dream.

I would post this on Giantess city, but I believe Chloe would be considered underage which goes against Giantess city's policies, at least that was the rule when I used to frequent there. I also had some bad experiences on Giantess city when I was first starting as a collager and saw many people treated badly on that site and decided to not post on there.

Reviewer: TarTar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chloe vs Emerson

I'm glad that Chloe is the type of character that really wants to have some fun with the planets! I'm sure that she would love for Raquel to let her have some more planets of her own.

Also I wonder if Raquel actually had some candy in her room, or if it was her plan all along to let Chloe find the Elite 50 ;)

As for Raquel, perhaps she needs some more alone time with some planets after being interrupted before... Maybe she should get some tips from Reika and her experience? hint hint ;)

Anyway, do your own thing. Please don't stop doing what you're doing!

Author's Response:

Making Chloe have fun was what I was going for. I didn't want her to be like the other girls and destroy the planets for cruel and/or sexual reasons, since I didn't want a character this young to be sexualized. This is why I decided to make her just as destructive, but make her reasons more out of sheer enjoyment.

If you are hoping for Raquel to have a similar experience with the planet, then you will be happy about what happens in the future. I hope you continue to support this story till it's end and I will try my hardest to make this story enjoyable.

Reviewer: Twilight Sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 12:58 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Hey you! Just checking in to see how you're doing! I'm super excited for the next chapter, and hope it comes out soon! ^^

Hooefully your real life situation is going well, whatever it may be :p

Author's Response:

I am currently working on the next chapter and I hope to post it up early next week. I know it has been a while but I hope I deliver something you and all the readers will enjoy to make up for my lack of updates.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 9:51 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge


Reviewer: TarTar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 9:14 PM Title: Reika's Ritual of Pleasure

Also I thought I should add that chapter 5 is my favorite so far. I like the way Reika thinks..

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. It wa one of my favorite chapters to write since including insertion and sexual acts is a pretty new thing for me to include in my writing and I think it turned out ok enough for someone to consider it a favorite chapter.

Reviewer: Twilight Sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 12:32 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

I really like this story man! But real life comes first; and I'd rather have a good story than a rushed bad story :p

You're awesome dude! Keep up the good work c:

Author's Response:

Thanks! i have some more free time so I hope to be more frequent and I will try not to rush this story at any time so that I may keep it at a good level of quality, so that the readers can enjoy this story to the fullest.

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