[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the ending to this chapter. I hope to see more like it
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice story so far, secretly hopeing for some unaware anal insertion.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
First of all great story. I'm glad I found it.
I don't know why but I love Jessica and Hannah's relationship after Hannah discovered the tiny people. I guess because having a giantess ordered around by a tiny is such a welcomed change. Also liked when Jessica told Mark to mind her or else she'd just tell Hannah to squish him(that's very erotic).
Cannot wait to see what happens next and I hope their mom is still normal as well as gets involved in this story(maybe at her office)
Anyways, love the characters and the dialogue. Keep the chapters coming.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think the 'side stories' are extremely essential to the overall story. The slight deversion from the central plot, helps draw the reader more deeply into the fantasy, building up an image of everything thats happening all around them,... drawing them in even deeper...
Hanna, is quickly becoming more, and more attractive! And, when she finally gets her wits together, and tells her 'Big' sister to shut the 'F' up,... She's going to become so 'powerful' she'll be elevated up to 'Goddess-like' standards!
.....so gentle,... and yet, so Gigantic!!!
* but, yeh,... more side stories, I think they really help to paint a picture.
--- poor Mark, gassed to death, and then,... 'Squished,''' between two massive walls of sweaty force'.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jarred you prick. I thought you were kinda okay but now you're on my shit list. This is exactly what Jessica was afraid of has been afraid of since the begining! She has no choice but to be controling her sister's the fricken sun compared to her, now more than ever! She has to act like Hannah just to get guys! That's the ultimate conceit don't you see?! What Jessica's doing isn't nice but she's acting in her own self interest and I can't fault that. Hannah's younger, prettier, works out apparenty, and was probably taller before the shrinking. She could of ran over Jessica a long time ago.Now Hannah has you and Jessica has nothing.
Poor one arm Jessica. It's over. It was over when Hannah was born. Sure they'll placate you for awhile but it won't last. Your only alive but for the grace of god and that god's name is Hannah. At least she's nice she probably won't kill you.