Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

....as I've said a hundred times before, I'm really not into the 'micro-sized' story, but this is really good!

Great set up.  Jessica getting shrunk was a shock!  I instantly assumed that she was going to become the/cruel & gigantic 'goddess!  And, the unaware Hanna is some really great stuff!  - (I do like 'unaware', and this was great!)

Your writing is excellent, very easy to follow and the discriptions are perfect too!  I only wish that you had made them 'doll-sized', and not so small that they would be hard to see,.. but, it's still a great tale,  amazing work! ;`)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your encouragement and when i finish this story, I'll consider writing one with doll-sized characters. Thanks again.