Date: March 08 2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, just wanted to encourage you to keep going. I really love the sidebits with other characters and think that this is one of the best stories on the site at the moment.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, really, your support helps more than you know.
Date: March 08 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
This has become a story I look forward to seeing updates honestly. You do good with descriptions and characters so far and its just been a good read so far. Hope you keep it up man
Author's Response:
Thank yoouuu! I really appreciate your support :)
Date: February 02 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another awesome episode, you make these scenes so intimate yet not so explicit. Not to mention, it makes me irritated in a good way how some students so carelessly toy with and kill their fellow peers who were the same size as them the previous day and it's all done so without a single care... it makes them feel so tiny. Anyway, good story and hope you make more!!
Date: January 11 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
First one or two and last chapter were fucking awesome.Probably because it was nasty-foot related.I would like to see more of that,if possible.
10 stars!!
-lolwat111-
Date: January 09 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
..... Or, if you wanted to keep the side stories all 'Unaware', you could use the same idea, but have all of the men inside the diner shrink,... and all the waitresses, (Three or four twenty-something beautys) working there, completely oblivious to the flash...
...all of the tiny men are scrambling for their lives beneath the enormous tables, as the giagantic waitresses tower above them!
Or, not. ... just a suggestion. ;`)
Date: January 04 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say i do like the dynamic of Jessica the speck being in charge (though when she gets what is coming for her i dont think many people will miss her)
Kinda makes me wonder if the rest of the world is stuck tiny and Hannah is the only one left at normal size
Date: January 04 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Your descriptions and writing are amazing. You've pulled off this genre extremely well with the unaware scenes etc. Very well written for your first story :)
Date: January 03 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I really like this story especially the unaware part! Let's hope there's some booty action in the short future or some more accidental entrapment. Anyways, good stuff!
Date: January 03 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really solid so far. You have a great knack for writing the mechanics of action and for choosing which details to describe.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. This is my first story and your encouragement is extremely appreciated.