Date: September 01 2020 4:19 AM Title: Prologue - The Incident
Please tell me he's coming back someday
[Report This]Date: August 04 2016 3:03 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident
This story was simply just brilliant. :) and a pleasure to read and enjoy, even to a totally blind reader.
If I may? Please stop apologising for a wrong you have not committed? Alas, we all are living lives such as they are. Indeed, there are many of us, myself included who have not even started writing a story, let alone writing the final chapter.
Love your work. :)
[Report This]Date: April 12 2016 10:53 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident
I absolutely love this story. You are by far the best author I have seen on this site and this is the best story I've seen so far.
I'm really looking toward to reading the sequel and a suggestion I have is maybe you can have someone get involved with someone's shoe, like inside their shoe. Just a thought. If you don't like it, you don't have to put it in.
PEACE!
[Report This]Date: March 31 2016 12:05 AM Title: Prologue - The Incident
I loved this story! Julia obviously knowsing and not caring was great, I loved the fact that she fianlly kept her word just to regret it. Then there was kiana, seeing him but not knowing it was him that was amazing with her talking to him. At the end though with Erica was amazing, she already had a gts fetish and never actually knew about him. Very nice mix of aware, aware mistaken, and unaware. I especially love stories where there is a question of who or what the character is. My fav chapter was probably mistaken identity.
Looking forward to sequel and possible other stories. Just hope there aren't too many people involved, and knowledge of shrinking isn't spread too much
Author's Response:
It makes me feel really good knowing that you loved my story! Writing "Mistaken Identity" was really fun, and it's one of my favorite chapters too. And Erica is a giantess who is going to become more and more prominant to the story, so I hope you look forward to her. Thanks again!
Date: March 30 2016 8:50 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident
Honestly, just what I needed. A solid story about a tiny man shrunk with some girls who gets "close" to him in a variaty of ways. Unless I've been looking in the wrong places, there's been a severe lack of those kinds of stories lately.
That being said, what the heck is up with chapter 8. I'm not buying that kiana would act that way to a bug. Kiana would have to be either drunk, or some kind of insectophile for that chapter to make sense. Also, he can survive an oven but not acids? That doesn't make too much sense either. Though I guess we saw no evidence the acids could have harmed him, pherhaps it was just paranoia on his part, he'ld probably have been fine.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you overall liked the story. That means a lot! That being said, I understand where you're coming from. I could come up with an explanation for each of your complaints, such as the fact that Kiana is really just an incredibly playful girl. Above all though, every giantess story requires a bit of suspense of disbelief on the part of the reader. Simple as that!
Date: March 28 2016 6:45 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident
Really loving the story! My favorite parts are easily the butt/fart stuff, hoping to see more of that in this story and future stories! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you're liking the story. More of what you like will certainly come in future stories. I hope you look forward to it!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2016 3:39 AM Title: Prologue - The Incident
Glad to see you are back. I can't wait to read more of this great story. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Reviews like yours are what inspire me to keep on writing!
[Report This]Date: January 05 2015 3:53 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident
Awesome! can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm really glad that you're looking forward to the next chapter! These kinds of reviews really make me want to write more!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 3:24 PM Title: Prologue - The Incident
I have been reading stories from this site for a long time and I have never written a review but this time I had to write one. Your story is absolutely great! It has all the elements I like, unaware, flattened body, fused to a part of her body... I can´t wait to read more. I have also read your additions in writing.com and sincerely all of them are amazing too. Thanks for this story and I really hope you can continue like this:)
Author's Response: Wow! Seriously this means a lot to me, thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you like my writings so much! I hope you stick around for all my future works! Thanks again!