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Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 6:38 PM Title: The shrinking

FTFEET please please continue this story :(



Author's Response:

The last chapter will be uploaded soon. Thank you for your support. 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2015 6:02 PM Title: Is this hell?

Please continue this story!!! :*(

Reviewer: chanbon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 6:12 PM Title: The shrinking

Excelent!

Reviewer: chanbon Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 6:08 PM Title: The shrinking

Excllent story!!!!! Thank you!!!

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 3:44 PM Title: Is this hell?

I hope Paul turns tattoo

Then

Megan could find as Save Paul, and perhaps shrink Rosie. It would be nice.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 12:34 PM Title: Is this hell?

Hope the next chapter comes soon! This is my favorite story on here in a long time!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2015 9:21 PM Title: The shrinking

I Just love this story. Another Excellent chapter! As the days continue to progress I hope Megan still smells her own feet occassionally and is in utter disbelief at how bad they get!!! Also can't wait to see what Rosie is up to!!! The wait in between chapters is Brutal because the story just makes me wanna read more!!

Reviewer: zbh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2015 12:38 AM Title: The shrinking

Hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 1:05 PM Title: The beginning of doom

Great chapter! I particularly liked Rosie's deceptive explanation of the 'game rules', I'll look forward to the next chapter!

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Date: January 04 2015 7:23 PM Title: The shrinking

nice chapter

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Date: January 04 2015 2:29 PM Title: The shrinking

I like where this seems to be headed. I hope Rosie finally gets to force him to smell her feet, hopefully while only an inch in height. My fingers are crossed that he meets a pungent demise at the stinky feet of Rosie.

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Date: January 04 2015 3:02 AM Title: The beginning of doom

Great stuff.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 2:00 AM Title: The shrinking

OMG Love it!!! Hope you make the next chapter as intricate and descriptive as possible!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2014 10:57 PM Title: A long day gets longer

Another great chapter

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2014 10:11 PM Title: The shrinking

Great Chapter. He still has a ways to go I think bro. We haven't seen Rosie or Megan in awhile. Also don't forget my idea from an early review either ;). Keep it up!

Reviewer: Noki_tapis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2014 9:25 PM Title: A long day gets longer

Really nice chapter ! 

Thank you very much for this really good story. I must admit that I'm sad that you finish it soon... but life is life right ?

Anyway if you want any idea or suggestions I might have a few.

You can do an unaware part with the mother and she could find him and think that he's into feet even if he don't want to admit it. 

You can also do a part like in the beginning with the movie but he would be dominate by his sisters because he wouldn't want to be an insole again and he would have to clean every feet of each girl of the house. They would be so happy that they would toss him in some girls shoes whose wear him all day.

Nice tuch the all team mate.

I hope that you will continue this story and that if you haven't inspiration my idea had helped you.

Really a big thank you for this amazing story !

Reviewer: Noki_tapis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 10:20 AM Title: The shrinking

Really the best story I ever read on this website.

Good narration and spelling. I hope you'll continue it soon.

You have some writer gift. :)

Thanksfully 

Nicolas



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It means a lot!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 3:01 AM Title: The shrinking

Are you going to continue soon ;(? I love this story!

Author's Response:

Sorry, yea, I'm going to continue it, I've just been busy with school, finals and all that stuff. I'll try to get it within the week. I'm just trying to think of certain events that will happen later in the story, so I can tie them in earlier. 

Reviewer: KentaRyu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 10:29 PM Title: The shrinking

Man, this story is great. I mean, I'm not into feet but I still like it a lot. 10/10.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 9:50 PM Title: The shrinking

It's soo nice coming home from a long day and seeing this story updated! Please continue soon!

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