Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story reminds me of the story, A Womans World, or Lunas Ascension. It seems to have the same world, and I very much enjoyed it, I have to say these characters intrigue me, and I'd happily read a longer story if you'd write it. I hope I'm not the only one who was drawn into the story by their unique shyness, and would love to see more.

Author's Response: IM not planing on making this a story perse. I'm going to make every chapter a difference experience that the couple in this story goes through. So please keep reading and reviewing as I write more chapters.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice.