Reviews For Small Kai
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Reviewer: schwuppy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 10:23 AM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Great Story. Please continue!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 1:09 AM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Wonder what Jenna will have in store for Kai when they get back to the apartment. I enjoyed this chapter and Jenna's character is starting to grow on me. Even though I hate rape and everything about it that seen in the wardrobe was stellar.
Cant wait to see what happens next.
aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 1:51 PM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Oh, brother! Watch this turn out to be a girl's bedroom...and laundry.

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 9:32 AM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Things are heating up indeed! Poor Kai just can't win, not even at hide and seek! Good thing he's pretty good at taking his small victories where he can :]

Reviewer: Russellp Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 9:11 AM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Jenna have stronge feelling s for Kai, and she will to be crazy when he start date Yasmine. ;)

Good work.. keep writting

 

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 7:23 AM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Jenna's pretty cruel. She's willing to trap Kai in a laundry basket at someone else's house. I guess Celeste and Yasmin put her in charge of Kai's safety, so she'll be forced to retrieve him eventually. Still, not cool. Is she going to get character development soon? If not, she still makes a pretty great villain.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 11:31 PM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Wow, this story has exceeded my expectations by a landslide!

There is a great mix of drama and sexiness as each girl has their own unique personalities.

I am loving what Jenna is doing! So creative, and acting like she is just an innocent bystander.

Trapped in a laundry basket. If this was a rich girl's house, then I would be excited. However, it's not, but Jenna does have a way to get everything she wants. She has to return with Kai or else their roommates would be suspicious of her.

The unaware moments are always thrilling. It's a sign of trouble just waiting to happen.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Frozenbutt Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 10:02 PM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Now he can add attempted rape to her list of offenses.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 7:00 PM Title: 'The Party' Pt.2

Great stuff

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