Reviews For Small Kai
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Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 10:41 PM Title: 'Introductions'

Great story, great characters, great writing. You have created master class work.

Reviewer: TheSmitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 4:56 AM Title: 'Introductions'

This is definatly one of my favourite stories on this site, written by one of my favourite authers! I was really looking forward to where this story was heading towards. It's a shame that it's been abandoned :(.

 

Anyway, Keep up the good work WITS, I can't wait to read your future stories :D

Peace Out ~TheSmitty

Reviewer: Minigts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 2:05 AM Title: 'Introductions'

What happened to this story. One of the best stories. Please continue when you have time.

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 11:53 PM Title: 'Introductions'

I love this story so far, hoping it will continue!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 10:34 PM Title: 'Introductions'

I agree with below, Jenna went too far this chapter. It's one thing to screw with someone but to attempt to rape someone with a severe disability like Kai? Good chapter though! You might be giving me a lot of reasons to dislike Jenna but the story itself is great!

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2014 1:26 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Nice story, but I'm really starting to hate this Jenna chick! Why does that stupid girl harass Kai all the time? I know this story is rated X and the whole feet thing is understandable, but I've never really understood the appeal in harassing tinies :S

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2014 7:57 PM Title: 'Introductions'

I actually like jenna, she is flirting, but more in a domineering way, and she's gonna get Kai whether he likes it or not. It reminds me of a yandere obsession in japanese manga. You're already laying down the setting, and the beginnings of it, if Kai was into that kind of thing like I am, he'd enjoy his situation a little more.

Reviewer: Mcayon Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 11:13 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Wow, what's Jenna's problem? I'm kinda pissed at her right now... >:( 

Reviewer: zelta228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 1:11 AM Title: 'Introductions'

This is quality writing. Period.

Reviewer: Frozenbutt Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 9:31 PM Title: 'Introductions'

I hope jenna gets her comeupance.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2014 4:12 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Also, I wanted to ask. Is this Kai the same Kai in "Kai and Tris"? I think you should get a name generator if your having trouble coming up with names, it's a little confusing...



Author's Response: The two stories are not related at all. I chose the name simply because I like it and it's short. :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2014 4:08 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Cool chapter! I kinda feel like Shaun being so non-chalant about Kai means that they might be good friends...I don't know, I just get that impression.

Jenna seems decent but she's also really passive agressive. I kinda don't like her for some reason; there is something about her that just irks me. Maybe I'll like one of the other gals better?

Anyway good chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2014 11:05 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Intriguing opener. :-)

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 12:14 PM Title: 'Introductions'

I am really liking this story and hope you continue it!

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 6:36 AM Title: 'Introductions'

I like the story so far, but at 1 foot tall he can't even reach a door knob.  How is he going to make it college without the help he is obviouly going to need?  How can his family let him go without planning for that?  Even a typical disabled person would need to make arrangements ahead of attending school.  I look forward to more and hope that the story stays gentle overall.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 5:53 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Love it. But please no M/m.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2014 5:17 AM Title: 'Introductions'

Apologies, I haven't read your other stuff yet.But I like the story so far. I can only imagine who is cruel and who is nice. Shaun seems pretty cool though; I hopr he and Shaun get along.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 9:17 PM Title: 'Introductions'

Looking forward to the rest of the story. Who will be his teacher?

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 8:58 PM Title: 'Introductions'

I'm loving this story so far! I gotta say despite how pokey and teasing the sister was painted to be, I gotta give respect to her for staying behind to take care of her tiny brother instead of just going away and living on her own. It really show that she DOES love her lil' bro a lot! I hope we get more Bro/Sis interactions in the future.

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