[Report This]Date: January 23 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter, I'm really enjoying the two different pairs. They're personality are so amazing and likeable. Tory and Frankie are my favorite in this story. Since Alex, Ava, and Jaden were part of the first story.
Wow what is Emma's problem. Needs to get a hobby to keep the psycho out.
Great story can't wait for then next chapter. I'm probably going to go read the first story now.
Date: January 23 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear oh dear, Jaden is in trouble again.
Date: January 11 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 Rewritten
Great chapter, softer than the other one but deeply interesting as the plot is moving. Although, I'm sad that Kristina didn't eat those guys or at least one or two of them as I'm a vore fan...hope to see her in her evil mood soon :)
[Report This]Date: January 11 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello mate,
Nice story there,filled with pro descbs,plot and character developments,am kinda jelly cuz I lack at these past two.I would like to see some shrunken boys and giant feet action,with nasty descriptions,if possibles.I see that this story goes on vore but I just want to try my luck.
I have also seen that you have favorites my story called life of tyson,so thanks for that.I would appreciate if you could leave some feedback too.
I will be here to support you till the end,
-Lolwat111-
Date: January 01 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to see what happens forward!! What has Kristina on her mind??^^
[Report This]Date: December 11 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another awsome chapter :) you almost feel sorry for the Pathtic ex how hung up she is on frankie lol keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: December 10 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Welcome back,
Awesome chapter, I really like the conversation between Tory and Frankie. They have a amazing bond.
Date: December 10 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad to have you back on this! I'm eagerly awaiting where you take this story next!
[Report This]Date: December 10 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
YAY! I'm happy to hear you have a new computer! The story seems like you still have your style, even after all this time. Can't wait for another update!
Date: December 10 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Welcome back, great chapter.
Date: November 17 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love all of your work. Maybe it would be cool if you had a few compiled short stories that dealt with some of the assassination missions Ryan had sent Tasha on. You know, so maybe you can let off some steam :)
Author's Response:
Hmmmmmm thats not a bad idea. I may actually just do that. This story is going to take awhile to finish; but dont be surprised if you see your suggestion pop on the most recent page.
Date: November 15 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really liking this so far! It's more like a mystery/horror than a typical giantess story. A bit more kinkyness between the gals and Jaden would be awesome too!
Date: November 10 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Welp....things are getting darker , 20 giantesses don't just disappear for no reason! I am curious to see how Tory, Frankie and Kristina will link up with Jaden, Alex and Ava.
Date: October 14 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
Personally I like the smothering! Jaden is one lucky mofo if hes got to hot giantess's fighting over him like this!
[Report This]Date: October 14 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
This was great!... Glad to see an update again!
Date: October 14 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with chlorez, Jaden is getting smothered a lot , excessively.. Maybe Alex and Ava are compensating for the trauma he faced and that is nice of them, it is. The other thing is that the troubles coming their way are so painful it'll be excruciating to read so you're cushioning us with all this.
Still keen on learning more about the story though so it isn't really criticism but more curiousity.
Author's Response:
Lol if you guys have learned anything from me is thateverything in the story happens for a reason. You have to have patience. Remember this story is suppose to be longer than the first and since their school started back up i have a latge range of options and routes ive already chosen and still able to choose from. Give me some credit lol. Its going to take a minute since a bunch of different character build up will be in the story so just sit back and enjoy...youll love it i promise.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
There's something about this story that bothers me for no important reason.I know Jaden had went through hell before last time, but aren't Ava and Alex smothering him too much? He needs to get his own space and hobbies and do something. This love triangle lack of an actual conflct and gets pretty boring.
Also, too much delicious chicken in the chapter, ok.
[Report This]Date: October 13 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story. After reading the 2 chapter, i think I want to read the first story now.
Favorite part is when Alex and Ava fight over Jaden.
[Report This]Date: September 20 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet. Glad to see these characters again along with some new faces. So far I'm diggin this tale.
aaron
PS will there be any sexy mature giantesses?(age 33+)
Date: September 16 2014 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow....Jaden is one lucky bastard to have Alex and Ava fighting to play with him!