[Report This]Date: March 11 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Nice to see this story updated always enjoy reading it, keep up the good work :)
- frankstergirl
Author's Response:
As always it's a pleasure :D
Date: March 11 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Victoria's twisted philsophy is not solid. She want hierarchy among students. But she is supposed to follow orders from Rebecca because she's giantess. besides great chapter!
Author's Response:
Is she? Not everything is that Black and White lol. There's a reason why Victoria is in charge and not Rebecca, keep reading as future chapters appear.
Date: March 10 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! The former President's death was pretty graphic though, not sure this story fits the "G" rating it has but I guess this is technically an erotica site so it doensn't really matter.
The only thing I will say about this story is that the perpective changes are kinda sudden and throw me off. Not sure what can be done since showing things from other characters points of view is part of the plot setup for this...
Anyway its still a good story either way! I'm eager to see where things go from here, I will say, as a villan, I REALLY like Emma. She's brutal, merciless, and gives no fucks. I also really like the playful, almost childlike way she behaves while ending lives in the most painful, gory ways.
And her simple, clear responses, like when she flat-out said she'll kill Jaden to Ava and Alex's faces...It really puts her up a peg in my villan book and I can't wait to see more of her; she's probably the most interesting character of Season 2 so far, IMO!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you, I actually like Emma as well. She....Well like all the others play a very important part in this story.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2015 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah shame..haha jk. Wonderful chapter. I like the different stories being told. And sometime there paths will cross. I'm still I really big fan of Frankie and Tory.
And a suggestion maybe make a half and half chapter. With Frankie and Tory. And Jaden, Alex and Ava.
I know it's part of the story and it will play a big part. But right now I don't care about Victoria.
Anyways thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm trying to get all the characters and their lives flowing seperately as things slowly come together in what will be an epic....Well I can't tell you the rest.