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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 10:26 AM Title: Bios

@Nostory. It Will definitely be interesting. That's all I can say for now without spoiling it!

Anyway, should be out either today or in a couple days. If you've got any more questions/comments, feel free to write a comment on the different view page :)

Author's Response:

I will definitely review the story once you update it of course! 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 7:43 AM Title: Bios

@Nostory (A few comments back). Would be interesting to see what you could do with the giant guys in another story someday.

As for "A Different View", don't worry, Zoey will get a little payback. That's all I will say for now! :)

Author's Response:

I have a lot of ideas for it but I need to focus both of my current stories first before moving on to anything. Can't introduce any giant men here without messing up the rules of the series anyway.

Seeing a victim of bullying get back at her own tormentors will be fun to watch! 

Reviewer: SoleEmbrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 12:19 AM Title: Bios

Looks like Alvin's got some bumps to smooth out before he gets his titaness paradise :) Good to see you back, NoStory! Keep up the good chapters!



Author's Response:

 He has more than what you see as well...trust me, these are all minor issues. I hope to see your story as well, I've become quite attached to both of them.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 8:13 AM Title: In the Company of Titans

No comment. Good story. Hope more chapters pop up soon.



Author's Response:

You might have to wait a bit but I am doing my best to get as many chapters released as I can without compromising quality. 

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 4:19 AM Title: Early Morning

Impressive. Can't wait for more. Love the character development.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I try to have characters that are believeable and have some sort of natural progression. Hope the rest of the story will impress you. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 7:14 PM Title: In the Company of Titans

Loved the chapter! Good on Alvin for making a bunch of powerful, and sexy allies!



Author's Response:

  Yes it is good but they won't always be around to save him. That is where he'll need to be at his best.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 1:57 PM Title: In the Company of Titans

Worth the wait for sure!  Really excited to see how this all plays out, now that Alvin's getting to know more titans.  Not so sure how Katharine will take all this though.... I have a feeling she'll be jealous.



Author's Response:

 Maybe she will, maybe she won't but either way ,it is good to see Alvin expanding his social circle. 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 9:37 AM Title: In the Company of Titans

Definitely worth the wait. Revenge, vengeance, love,
all these emotions. Will have a huge effects on the story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, it'll definitely impact the story and I hope you follow it to the end. But where did you get love? 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 8:45 PM Title: Bios

That's just me though, and I get that not everyone's into that.

Look forward to seeing what you put out :)

Author's Response:

Give it about 8 hours, I don't think you'll be disappointed. Actually hoping I didn't lose any readers because of the long wait. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 8:43 PM Title: Bios

Yeah, there's a bit of a buildup, and it focuses on different characters, but once the story picks up, it'll get good. Personally like having more mixed genders, simply cause it keeps it a little more realistic, and can provide a bit of a break in the action, but still having a giant character in the story.

Author's Response:

 I might try that one day, having giant men alongside women of the same size, it really does add to the story in terms of realism. I actually kind of wish to see Zoey get her revenge against her now tiny bullies. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 11:46 AM Title: Bios

That's awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Seems like my story "A Different View" will be losing some suppoet! Lol. The story, and the mixed size world genre in general seems pretty popular

Author's Response:

  It'll be out in about 12 hours. I like the story you have there, just waiting for more gts action even if I haven't left a review. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 12:27 PM Title: Bios

Any updates soon?

Author's Response:

 Finals just ended and I've got a five week break so I'm actually writing it out now. Sorry for taking so long but it'll be out this week, I promise it!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 10:47 AM Title: Bios

But, with all due respect to Chrlorez, please don't make Alvin one of those monsters of Nietzchean philosophy.*

* i.e., worse than those one fights.

Author's Response:

I was lost until you added the little footnote there. I don't want to spoil it so you'll have to see if Alvin goes mad with power and winds up being a bigger bully to Wendy than she ever was to him. All I'll say is that things are not what they seem. 

On a sidenote, I know how much you like Jessica from The Escape and the reboot is intended to clean up the problems in the first one, it'll get worked on and be completed too! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 10:42 AM Title: Payback's A Cassie

You certainly know how to weave a riveting tale. I tore through all seven of these chapters in one sitting!

:-D

Author's Response:

Thanks , its been a while since I've seen you review a story of mine! 

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 1:25 PM Title: Payback's A Cassie

I feel very envious of Alvin right now. Standing on a table amidst three divine giantesses, and they know he's a good person and not a creep because Cassie testifies to it. He might as well try the lottery while he's at it.

Another good chapter. Satisfying and setting the stage for some interesting consequences, whether for Alvin or Wendy. And the foot scene was not bad. If it's your first time then it's smart to be brief like you did.



Author's Response:

  I'm kind of envious of Ben but that might be due to the fact that he is the best friend of that world's only giantess and she happens to be a hot busty blonde! 

I don't really like foot scenes but next chapter will feature more feet, hoping it'll go down well with the readers since its a subfetish I've never really warmed up to, I would prefer the giantess to use her breasts or butt than her feet. 

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 9:30 AM Title: Payback's A Cassie

I'm glad Alvin is finally not getting treated like shit. But revenge is a double-edged sword, my friend. Swing wisely, or you will take yourself down as well. Alvin and Wendy should work out their problems. A little brother/sister character development is a good thing. Otherwise, you might as well kill Wendy off in a fiery explosion. That or have Alvin be the ultimate bully. Wouldn't that be an ironic and interesting turn of events!



Author's Response:

 How true, revenge is like a lightsaber and like you said, swing too far and you'll cut yourself in two. 

I think it would be highly unlikely for Wendy to die that unless I let Michael Bay write the rest of the story. It would be really interesting to see Alvin be the one bullying her, using Cassie to torment Wendy, to really break her. Whether the brother-sister dynamic goes that way remains to be seen, it could easily swing either way. 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 9:13 AM Title: Payback's A Cassie

Wow Cassie, is so amazing. Fate has interesting ways of changing, Wendy can clarify that.

Alvin has good things and some payback in his future.

Author's Response:

Cassie is definitely amazing and yeah, fate can take you to very interesting places, Wendy went from apex predator to bottom feeder in a blink of an eye there. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 6:54 AM Title: Bios

I understand Katherine isn't as big in Alvin's life, but it'd be great to see her more in the story.

Author's Response:

I can't say when she shows up only that she will show up again. Eventually. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2014 12:33 AM Title: Bios

Also I went back and read some old chapters and I completely forgot about Katharine. What happened to her? She's a Titan too and has known Alvin longer than Cassie, why hasn't she ever stepped in to help him yet?

Katherine seemed to be someone Alvin has known for a long time...Just saying. It's kinda odd that Alvin has to turn to someone he just met for help when he had a powerful Titan ally all along.



Author's Response:

Alvin knows Katharine for a longer time than Cassie but they were never too chummy, more acquaintances that never got passed that stage so it would be like you asking that guy you shared one to two classes with for help even though neither of you even knew the other's birthday.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 10:40 PM Title: Payback's A Cassie

Cool chapter! I definitely think Wendy deserved it, however, what happens when Wendy and Alvin are home together? Cassie isn't gonna be able to do much of anything to help him then. Also did Cassie just say Alvin was one of her closest friends?

I didn't think they were friends already, I thought Cassie was just helping Alving out of guilt? Either way it does seem kinda soon for Cassie to say something like that after they only met the day before.

Chapter was great, just that little detail kinda threw me for a loop. I can't wait to read more of this, its one of my favorite newer stories on this site.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Cassie won't have much luck when Alvin is at home, not unless she plans on Alvin moving in with her.

 

 Trust me, vgiv and I worked this one out, there is a very important reason why Cassie made that announcement in front of the whole school, it'll be revealed later on what its for. Hold on to it for a while, it'll be important.

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