Date: May 21 2016 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the unaware story, and the amply-endowed giantess. Some of the action was hard to track, but I got the general sense of it. I even appreciated the sci-fi explanation at the end and the comical carelessness throughout. Interesting to see the dynamic between Lisa and Alex, too, he behaving with steadfast ignorance and she being complex and interesting. Very much enjoyed Lisa's story.
I wrote this for a story contest on Giantess City way back when called the Unaware Fair. It came out well at the time but it definitely could use some touching up. If I wasn't restricted on my word count I think I'd have come up with a better ending for Alex. Thanks for reading and reviewing though!
Date: August 27 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I really loved the interaction scene between Lisa and Jill. The other two crushes weren't fleshed out much, though - I wish that you had described her feet a bit more or something. Otherwise, really great job!
thanks a lot, glad you dig it. Only reason i wasn't more descriptive of the feet is coz it was for a contest and i had a word count restriction.