[Report This]Date: August 06 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 12: Bad Ideas and Big Mistakes
Next Chapter: "What's wrong with em,... why won't he get up?", say's Tris.
"H,m I don't know....",
"He's not breathing Tris, quick strap em to my dildo before he gets cold!"
................. ;`) Kai- , "Wha, happened.... where am I?" "Why is it so dark?"
Author's Response: Haha, that would be the chapter where they all go insane, that probably won't happen :P
Date: August 06 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really great story, and it keeps getting better. Poor Kai. But I actually hope that the girls will use him for their own pleasure more and more :D
Author's Response: Thank you :) You will definitely see more of that ;)
[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 10: Apologies
H'm, sounds like Christy completely changed her jealous streak and realized that she had better behave herself...especially around Tris! :/
That little kick across the room was pretty dramatic, but... I found it just slightly hard to imagine that, Christy could have, 1) realized what she had done. 2) jumped up and dove out into the room fast enough to get under him. and, 3) actually catch him, before he hit the floor...
I suppose that it could be possable,... but, just try and kick a pencil across the room and then jump up and try and catch it... bet, ya can't! ;)
Don't get me wrong,... just being realistic; still a great plotline though, and I'm still lovin this story!
I was hoping there at the end when Tris couldn't find them downstairs, that she had taken him into the shower with her... ;`)
Can't wait for the next scene!
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about that scene a lot too, how I picture it is Kai didn't fly too far across the room, more upwards than forwards, try to picture that :) Also you may have to wait just a liiitle bit longer for that scene ;)
Date: August 04 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Twist
Tris is pretty stupid.
"She drugged me and tried to kill you, but I won't risk our friendship trying to confront her about it."
How heartless is that reaction?
Author's Response: This review helped me write 'Apologies' thank you :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Twist
"TWISTED" indeed... Did that last line say that Christy was downstairs, cooking breakfast, Kai in hand ?
I don't want to think about that....
I'd like to see Christy smuggle him into the shower with her... just to use him again, like she did before... only, with Tris knowing that he had said, that she had tried to kill him,... making it impossible for her to try it again, so soon...
...yes, shower scene from Kai's perspective! ;`)
Author's Response: Ah, no, it's supposed to be Tris who has him in hand, not Christy :P I just realized it looks like that, thanks for pointing that out :D As for your suggestion, it's a very interesting idea. I will definitely think about that, I will see what else comes to me but that will be hard to beat. :P
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
_ in regard to the previous review... {Then, what the hell is he complaining about!"} I was just joking... Lol!
Nice follow up chapter! So Tris doesn't love him anymore, or see him as the man that he used to be? (The idea of 'snuffing him out'), was what they were referring to, on the T.V.- about the other tiny people getting 'killed off' in accidental mishaps?
....and, Tris is actually concidering this? Damn, our little buddy better get the fuck outta there,... fast!
I hope that Tris come to her sences, and pulls her head out of Christy's ass....
Can't wait for the next episode!
Author's Response: Well, you're in for twist ;)
Date: August 04 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 8: That Night
Putting aside the sociopathic behavior, is Christy really stupid enough to think that this plan will work? Even if Tris somehow doesn't blame her for it, she'll always blame herself for it, and being with Christy will just be a constant reminder of how she failed in her promise to protect Kai.
Author's Response: Haha, probably yes :) I hinted at her 'stupidity' earlier on. We'll see. You're in for a twist ;)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Goodnight - Kai
Good job Tris. You just sat there and watched the man you love get raped.
Author's Response: I know, what was she thinking! :o
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Always love seeing things from the tiny's perspective, gives a better idea of what he's going through, both physically and mentally. In terms of suggestions, he's been in the front of Chrissy's panties, what about some time in the back.
Author's Response: Thanks I will be sure to add something like that later on :) The next few chapters after the next one will tone down a little, but with smaller segments similiar to what you've seen in Goodnight, so it might not be too far away. Look forward to the next chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I liked the 'second act' much better... ;`)
One thing I noticed though, that seemed a bit strange, was the idea that Tris allowed this to happen so easily... She seemed to be so concerned about him before, then when Christy takes him willingly, away... and, there's that long period of time where, she can't see him, you would think that she would be wondering what he was doing down there between her long, lusious, legs!
If she is suddenly attracted to Christy, then what's to become of him? Will they turn him into a permanent sex toy, or... maybe a little slave to accompany them in bed together, and if they do...
Then, What the hell is he complaning about!
* the question of his survival is the most important thing, and... he better not Rat out, on Christy or he'll probably suffer an accident of some sort.
This reminds me of a similar situation where the little man learns to like his new position in life, and all's well that ends well !
Great Stuff ;`)
Author's Response: Haha, I had a feeling people would like the second part better ;) I probably won't do anything like that again unless people ask for it or I feel the story requires it. If people ask for it I will go back to a chapter and do the same thing, i'll probably rename the chapters 'Goodnight: Tris' and 'Goodnight: Kai'. As for what you noticed, Tris sees her best friend Christy as a person she can still trust up to this point, on top of that she is nearly drunk so she isn't exactly her self and on top of THAT, she has feelings for Christy and Christy is in love with her. She sees Kai as another person in this chapter, not the boyfriend she used to have, so it is only what Christy is doing that shocks her, not who she is doing those things to. Hope that explains it :)
Date: August 04 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: Goodnight - Kai
I see christy possibly getting shrunk at some point
Author's Response: Why Christy ? :0
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really enjoying the point of views, they're lending an original vibe to a familiar scenario. Good work.
Author's Response: Thank you, this is my first story so i'm glad people are enjoying it so much :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Goodnight - Tris
Oh my! Things really are starting to get interesting. Here's hoping this is just the beginning.
Author's Response:
Your hopes will most likely come true in the next few chapters or so ;)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
This is outstanding! Looking forward to the next installments.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: August 03 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I'm starting to get the bad ending vibes in regards to Kai. I hope I'm wrong and he somehow comes out of this alive and not too miserably. Overall, I like the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) We will see...
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Christy sounds like she has a thing for Tris. Her comments while drunk, and the initial "hidden" smirk on her face of seeing him shrunk. Seems like she was waiting for a time to make her move.
Author's Response:
You might just be on to something ;)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 4: Walk in The Park
Whoa, too close for comfort on that park bench! Nice scene set up for that little surprise. I can't wait for the next chapter, Christy sounds like she's an accident waiting to happen...
Can't wait to see her with Kai, maybe she could find some little games to play with him?
....(Little) games to play? 'Twister' sounds good! ;`)
Author's Response:
She does doesn't she? ;)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 2: Hospital
Great start on this, I'm enjoying the 'inner thoughts', that the charactors have. Assuming what things will actually 'be like' for them, after this strange occurance. I really like the mixed emotions you've displayed here....
I'm intrigued! Can't wait to see what happens next, your writing is excellent too!
Nice work! ;`)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! There is a lot more to come yet ;)
I really appreciate the reviews!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! There is a lot more to come yet ;)
I really appreciate the reviews!