[Report This]Date: August 05 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 10: Apologies
H'm, sounds like Christy completely changed her jealous streak and realized that she had better behave herself...especially around Tris! :/
That little kick across the room was pretty dramatic, but... I found it just slightly hard to imagine that, Christy could have, 1) realized what she had done. 2) jumped up and dove out into the room fast enough to get under him. and, 3) actually catch him, before he hit the floor...
I suppose that it could be possable,... but, just try and kick a pencil across the room and then jump up and try and catch it... bet, ya can't! ;)
Don't get me wrong,... just being realistic; still a great plotline though, and I'm still lovin this story!
I was hoping there at the end when Tris couldn't find them downstairs, that she had taken him into the shower with her... ;`)
Can't wait for the next scene!
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about that scene a lot too, how I picture it is Kai didn't fly too far across the room, more upwards than forwards, try to picture that :) Also you may have to wait just a liiitle bit longer for that scene ;)