Reviews For Kai and Tris
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Reviewer: DodoFTW Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Twist

Nice work! I wish you could do that kind of insertion in your upcoming story!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Twist

Tris is pretty stupid.

"She drugged me and tried to kill you, but I won't risk our friendship trying to confront her about it."

How heartless is that reaction?



Author's Response: This review helped me write 'Apologies' thank you :)

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Twist

"TWISTED" indeed... Did that last line say that Christy was downstairs, cooking breakfast, Kai in hand ?

I don't want to think about that....

  I'd like to see Christy smuggle him into the shower with her... just to use him again, like she did before... only, with Tris knowing that he had said, that she had tried to kill him,... making it impossible for her to try it again, so soon...

...yes, shower scene from Kai's perspective!  ;`)



Author's Response: Ah, no, it's supposed to be Tris who has him in hand, not Christy :P I just realized it looks like that, thanks for pointing that out :D As for your suggestion, it's a very interesting idea. I will definitely think about that, I will see what else comes to me but that will be hard to beat. :P

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