[Report This]Date: August 12 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really great story. I will certainly be reading your next one. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: August 11 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I'm sorry to see this story over. I was really hoping to see Kai be shoved up Christy's butt, preferably by Tris. Hopefully we'll see plenty of butt interaction in your next story, even though the size difference isn't big enough to allow for full insertion.
Date: August 09 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Good chapter ! Nicely written, as well as the whole story so far. Waiting for what's next !
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: August 08 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Wow. You're really an amazing author. It keeps getting better. And you're updating the story so fast, that's incredible. Please, keep it up, you're doing great !
Author's Response: Thanks! It's reviews like these which keep me updating the story :)
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Ooh, wonder how far Christy's going to take this. With any luck, Tris'll either remain oblivious, or be turned on by this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Anything I say in reply would probably spoil the next chapter :P
[Report This]Date: August 07 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really impressed with how quickly you're releasing these chapters. How's kai going to get out, hmm? Maybe tris'll need a little help.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I have a few ideas of how she will get Kai out.
Date: August 06 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really great story, and it keeps getting better. Poor Kai. But I actually hope that the girls will use him for their own pleasure more and more :D
Author's Response: Thank you :) You will definitely see more of that ;)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
_ in regard to the previous review... {Then, what the hell is he complaining about!"} I was just joking... Lol!
Nice follow up chapter! So Tris doesn't love him anymore, or see him as the man that he used to be? (The idea of 'snuffing him out'), was what they were referring to, on the T.V.- about the other tiny people getting 'killed off' in accidental mishaps?
....and, Tris is actually concidering this? Damn, our little buddy better get the fuck outta there,... fast!
I hope that Tris come to her sences, and pulls her head out of Christy's ass....
Can't wait for the next episode!
Author's Response: Well, you're in for twist ;)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Always love seeing things from the tiny's perspective, gives a better idea of what he's going through, both physically and mentally. In terms of suggestions, he's been in the front of Chrissy's panties, what about some time in the back.
Author's Response: Thanks I will be sure to add something like that later on :) The next few chapters after the next one will tone down a little, but with smaller segments similiar to what you've seen in Goodnight, so it might not be too far away. Look forward to the next chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I liked the 'second act' much better... ;`)
One thing I noticed though, that seemed a bit strange, was the idea that Tris allowed this to happen so easily... She seemed to be so concerned about him before, then when Christy takes him willingly, away... and, there's that long period of time where, she can't see him, you would think that she would be wondering what he was doing down there between her long, lusious, legs!
If she is suddenly attracted to Christy, then what's to become of him? Will they turn him into a permanent sex toy, or... maybe a little slave to accompany them in bed together, and if they do...
Then, What the hell is he complaning about!
* the question of his survival is the most important thing, and... he better not Rat out, on Christy or he'll probably suffer an accident of some sort.
This reminds me of a similar situation where the little man learns to like his new position in life, and all's well that ends well !
Great Stuff ;`)
Author's Response: Haha, I had a feeling people would like the second part better ;) I probably won't do anything like that again unless people ask for it or I feel the story requires it. If people ask for it I will go back to a chapter and do the same thing, i'll probably rename the chapters 'Goodnight: Tris' and 'Goodnight: Kai'. As for what you noticed, Tris sees her best friend Christy as a person she can still trust up to this point, on top of that she is nearly drunk so she isn't exactly her self and on top of THAT, she has feelings for Christy and Christy is in love with her. She sees Kai as another person in this chapter, not the boyfriend she used to have, so it is only what Christy is doing that shocks her, not who she is doing those things to. Hope that explains it :)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Really enjoying the point of views, they're lending an original vibe to a familiar scenario. Good work.
Author's Response: Thank you, this is my first story so i'm glad people are enjoying it so much :)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
This is outstanding! Looking forward to the next installments.
Author's Response:
Thanks! :D
Date: August 03 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I'm starting to get the bad ending vibes in regards to Kai. I hope I'm wrong and he somehow comes out of this alive and not too miserably. Overall, I like the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) We will see...
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Christy sounds like she has a thing for Tris. Her comments while drunk, and the initial "hidden" smirk on her face of seeing him shrunk. Seems like she was waiting for a time to make her move.
Author's Response:
You might just be on to something ;)