Date: February 17 2018 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
Airplane is my favorite comedy film.
I hope this story doesn't suddenly do a 180 and turn into an evil giantess story, I hate when macrophile writers do that. Its really hard to find good quality gentle giantess stuff.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, I just read all 8 chapters, and this is great, it is more like a story than a fantasy.
Theres a lot of good scenes and the plot changes often, expanding from Peter in Emily's room.
These moments with Joseph and the other animals are interesting. I was about to skip those parts, but they were actually entertaining.
Therer is a lack of sexy stuff in this story, but I think its about to be intense in the coming chapters.
Any chance Emily's mom will have some fun? I would like to see some action from her. Also, your description of Emily's mom made her look like a grandma in my opinion. She sounded lost and clueless and I hope that impression gets changed.
The story is fantastic though. I cant wait to read more. Very entertaining.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry to disappoint you on both levels but there won't be anything else involving Emily's mom and the sexy stuff won't be really intense.
The purpose of writing this story for me is to take some scenarios and fantasies and bring them to life, while keeping them as real as I can get away with. Sure sometimes I add in some completely unrealistic elements like Joseph the pet ant but even he has a purpose. Just a quick heads up, if your a writing critic then Joseph's point in the story might seem pretty stupid.
The point is I could add in a lot of sexy stuff but that would only take away from the story since it would be incredibly out of character (Emily just discovered a giantess fetish and the next day she's inserting Peter into her pussy).
So if you're looking for some intense sexual action I'm gonna have to say sorry to disappoint. I prefer to add in fetish material around a well built storyline.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, at least she wasn't instant horny dominatrix like most other gts-mothers (of their daughters' shrunken boyfriends) are depicted.
Author's Response:
While I do enjoy reading about that I've grown very tired of that being the only depiction of gts mothers.