[Report This]Date: June 28 2014 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
A-ha! He's lying to her, by omission, again. Nice prolongation of the suspense!
Date: June 21 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Be careful about building up this secret too much. Overhype it and it might end up disappointing when finally revealed.
Date: June 20 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Intresting story. Your a talented writer. He's lucky that he woke up in the room of a freind. Then again I suspect that maybe no accident. I see a plan at work here.
Fighting spiders and a mouse sucks but that ant is proving useful. First story I can recall where an ant is a pet to a shrunken man.
Wonder where this story will go from here.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Beneath that smile was something entirely different? Better find a way to let it out or it'll consume you from within!
Sooner or later his secret will be out and he'll have to deal with it. Enjoying this so much!
Author's Response:
You'll have to figure that out yourself. The signs are all there.
Date: June 19 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Finally some action! Let's hope for more and naughtiness :)