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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 3

He should've kept the arachnid as a pet. Assuming, of course, you wanted to keep the superheroic references coming.

"Spider Pete; Spider Pete!
He likes to smell Emily's feet."

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Although I don't have arachnophobia, spiders creep me out when they're shown up close. Altbough having a pet ant is weird to me, since they travel in groups a lotnof tuebtime and would probably not stay in the vicinity of a person.

The ant and spider size comparisons raises an interesting question. How small is Peter, in terms of measurement, anyway? I don't think it was brought up before.

P.S. : If you don't have your own computer, invest in a flash drive. Otherwise, things might get embarrassing.

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

He told her what he did durring the day, does that mean he told her about exploring her sneakers? Possible solution to saving your stories but only having s hared computer, you could save your stories to a usb flash drive. Loving the story so far, can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

Worth the wait.

Yes, how did Emily get all those things? There might be things she ain't telling Peter.

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