Date: November 26 2021 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story is truly so amazing, great work!!:)
Date: June 28 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
I thought this story sounded familiar. But, after reading these first two chapters, straight through, I'm now _sure_ I've read this before! You must've temporarily removed it for lack of reviews, or something, after the first time around.
Don't worry, though. Now that _I'm_ reviewing you, you've got nothing to worry about! Darien? DF??
*Pauses*
Somebody get some smelling salts! This dude has fainted!!
Author's Response:
Holy shit! The Carycomic has just reviewed my story! . . . . . *passes out from over excitement* :)
Sorry sir but no, this is actually a brand new story of mine that I haven't even finished writing, let alone publish.
[Report This]Date: June 05 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Nice trick to get her to take her shoes off. I've never read or thought of anything like that before.
He's worried about her thinking he's weird becasue he likes, feet but I have a feeling further on in the story that wont be true. especially if he can think of ways to help her relax.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm. I like giantesses, I like Batman, and I like this story. The only problem I have is that I feel that ... the main guy is having a little too much fun a little too fast in the story. You don't cry for nearly an hour about being shrunk and have fun in the Batcave that quickly. Hopefully this can be remedied with occassionql flashes of emotional distress from... the protagonist. Seriously, I tbink I forgot his name already.
Didn't spot any vlspelling errors, but then again, I wasn't paying attention.
Author's Response:
Well let's look at things through Peter's (the protagonist´s) eyes. Eyes he's feeling the overwhelming effects of shrinking to two and a half inches tall. He broke down crying and everything. Afterwards, when he's cried everything out of his system he's got nothing left to feel. Think back to when you were young and so upset by something you cried over it until you ran out of tears, where do you go after that? After you've felt about as upset as you can get you're pretty much just numb to the situation. To put it simply "Yes I'm shrunk. I've already cried over it, so what's left to do but move on?"
And then comes along a giantess who happens to also be your best friend. She comforts you, offers to take care of you, and let's you sleep in the fucking BatCave. I'd be feeling pretty good right about now.
But don't worry, Peter will have to learn to get used to being at his new size and dealing with some "teasing".
Date: May 30 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love the sense of fun mixed with the schocking situation. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice fun chapter. I hope you don't have her go razy with power and eventually see him as a sex toy. That's all, both of them are too likeable for that.