Date: December 31 2016 2:59 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
I still think that was pretty dangerous. But a fun chapter nonetheless. The characters are very likable.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 12:30 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
another great chapter.. this was as good as the first chapter.. the way he is helpless against her sex and couldn't even get into her panties without struggling...
She blinks, and a slow smirks settles on her lips as without a seconds thought her hand reaches down, zips her jeans back up and then buttons them. - trapping him inside.. totally brilliant.. and then..
But then again, he asked for this. She was only giving him what he wanted.
^ I like it when she takes control.
VividImagination: It's more playful then it is controlling.
^ this is also correct.. which just adds to the fun
its not just the scenarios you've written about.. but also the way its been written.. the description and language are powerfully wet :p
rating: 10.. J.M ;)
Date: May 20 2014 9:45 AM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
I'm not usually one to make suggestions to authors other than: write what turns you on. If you find your story hot, odds are your readers will, too.
However, you did ask, so I'll put in my two cents. Insertion is my all-time favorite activity, and your fondness for it is evident in your wonderful smut. I know how hard it is to work over the same anatomy while using fresh vocabulary, and the only advice I can give is to let the context explain your metaphors. Up close, labia can appear as a dozen different things. Let the action define the function, and derive the form from that.
But here's my actual request: I'd like to see your female protagonist explain to one of her girlfriends what it's like to have a five-inch-tall lover. How it feels, how it turns her on, how it compares to having a full-size lover. More plausibly, her girlfriend should not (initially) be into this fetish, she should be skeptical, and our protagonist should have to go into erotic detail to express herself. I'm divided over whether her tiny lover should be listening in; it would maximize honesty if the conversation were just between the women, but you might find it more arousing to write if her tiny lover is hiding in her panties as she talks about how it feels to have him down there. I'm not (necessarily) suggesting a threesome; it's the girltalk I'm after.
Author's Response: I'd never thought about describing it that way. It's like you've opened a new door to me! And I do like that idea; it could be like writing smut through dialogue. I'm intrigued because I wouldn't want her to actually admit to having tiny man in her panties; he's kept a secret, so perhaps it's more her explaining the fetish and confessing about what she fantasizes versus what really is happening. And him listening in makes it all the better. Well... Don't be surprise if I shout out you in a chapter you inspired me for :)
Date: May 20 2014 4:06 AM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
It's wonderful to see a giantess and the guy getting into their situation. That the guy enjoys her attention and actively seeks it out is nice. I really liked that he was the one that asked to spent the day in her panties though I can't say I'm a fan of the anal.
As far as scenarios. Have you considered a situation where she needs to wear some kind of swimwear and having a 5 inch tall man in her panties would a bit too much? So she needs to hide him in her vagina. I'm reminded of a clothing store that for some reason in winter they find some pretty girls, put them in bikinis and put them under heat lights. They're suppose to stay still and most of them do a reall good job of it. It seems to be an effective form of advertisement. Could she stay still with him inside of herself?
Author's Response: Wow... That's actually a really good idea. I can picture now a scenario slowly forming in my head :D you will definitely see a swim suit chapter. And thank you for your input and just for reading the story :)
Date: May 19 2014 12:44 AM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
Another wet chapter. Keep writing from your perspective; we have plenty of male writers to hold up their end.
You've also figured out us tiny guys. Like many submissives, we actually want to be in control in spite of our size. Meeting someone like you is our dream.
Next time, pull over!
Author's Response: Ahaha, yes I guess next time I should! xD Thanks so much for the vote of confidence! It means a lot. And I know what it's like to feel dominant and occasionally want to toss that facade out the window. I only assumed it was the same for the other side!
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 10:23 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
This was the hottest one of them all! He knew he shouldnt have teased her. I like it when she takes control.
I have another suggestion that is similar to the car ride, but its with the breasts:
The guy loves her breast milk and he sucks on her nipple. She is aroused but annoyed that he sucks and teases her. She decides that he asked for it, and takes his head and presses it into her nipple. The nipple barely fits in his mouth. The guy kinda likes it so he starts sucking again. However, the nipple enlarges a little making the guy stuck on her nipple and he cant back off it. She likes it now since he cant tease her anymore and puts on a bra. She then walks around in her bra while breastfeeding him.
Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad you thought so! I really liked it as well. And I very much like the idea of forcing him to just stay on her nipple, stuck there. However, unsure how I feel on the breast milk.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 6:36 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
Awesome chapter update mate :)
I really am enjoying this story more than many others primarilly as it is a good shrunken-man scenario story writen from the perspective of the giantess rather than the little guy :)
It's bizarre how few of those stories I am able to find ya know? ^_^
Personally I adore insertion above all other scenarios :) Not to say that other situations i.e analy, breast/foot play aren't good too. But needless to say I do enjoy the rather consistent use of that specific theme in your chapters so far mate :D
As for scenario suggestions, a bath scene wouldn't be too off topic :) plenty of options for interaction there :D
Accidental panty entrapment could also be a troublesome scenario which could come up, say for when the giantess is conversing with her boss, the little guy perched above her waistline (for variable reasons within/outside his control) is jostled from some outside force causing him to tumble down right into a sensitive spot on the giantess's person.
Of course the time and the place for it would hardly be ideal ^_^;
just some suggestions of the top of my head there mate :) Hope they're usable.
Also your thing with the description and additional words to describe body parts, I wouldn't worry so much and just pick what words work best for you, or try investigating other writer's examples for some terms or words you may not have thought to try? :)
Author's Response: I've never really thought much on how most stories are from the man's point of view! But I guess I enjoy writing from the female's because I'm one myself. That's the only reason I could think of! Occasionally it's harder writing from giantess's point of view, but fun! There will be more insertion, so I think you'll look forward to that! And I definitely plan for a shower scene at least. The accidental entrapment is great! I'll see if I can't work something out eventually.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 3:50 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
Really enjoying the different scenarios you have going so far. The fact that each chapter is it's own self contained story is refreshing. Personally, I'd like a good anal play scene. Maybe they're in the bath, and she's lying on her front, asking him to clean her rear. He's in between her cheeks, cleaning her hole when he slips, and slides on in. She panics and gets up to get him out, but realises how good he feels in there, and the chapter ends with something along the lines of "I'm sure a few more hours in there won't hurt."
Author's Response: Wow, that's great actually! I just might do it, but throw my own twist in. I knew I've wanted to do an anal play chapter, was just unsure was to what to do. But you've certainly helped me with that :)
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 2:39 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
Whoops. I forgot to rate the chapter. That wasn't very nice. Looks like I'll have to use 11 stars this time. You can't see the extra half star, but nevertheless, it's there.
Author's Response: Firstly, I think you should write. Whatever it is you would write would be magnificent and no less. Secondly, I attempted at sending you another private message. Please tell me it worked? Because if not, goddammit. It'll be disappointing :p
Date: May 18 2014 2:37 PM Title: Dangerous Care Rides
It just blows my mind that you can up with something so perfect within a day. It's not just the witty and entirely realistic dailogue, but the descriptions are just unreal.
It's really heart warming to see how much she indulges him. She could refuse him at any time, but can't stand to see him hurt or dissapointed. It's also very funny to read! Though, I'd be lying if I said I spent most of the chapter laughing. ;)
And then after his little 'control session', she goes back to being the dominant one. It's more playful then it is controlling, I think.
Checking out the chapter end notes...
Yeah, that scenerio you mentioned sounds amazing. If I may make a suggestion, it would only be that during her work day he could wait for her to have a customer, and then go ballistic inside of her to get 'revenge'.
Also, a chapter where they go to a movie could be fun too. There could be more food play, where he gets dropped into her popcorn. It would have to be a pretty vacant movie theater though, so they wouldn't get caught. Or it could entail some other type of sensual interaction.
Uh oh. I seem to be hogging all of the author's responses. I can just hear my fellow readers plotting my demise in the shadows. XD
Author's Response: I mentioned best reviews ever, didn't I? Just checking on that ;) I'm glad you liked the dialogue! Despite their vast differences, they're still a couple. And that's the sort of relationship I like- calling each other dicks and things among that sort. Haha. The revenge is interesting, although I didn't exactly plan to do that prompt :p But oh. My. Goodness!! That movie theatre idea is brilliant. You're brilliant! Don't be surprised if that happens in like the next few chapters or maybe even next chapter :o oh gosh... I feel bad now... I'm gonna start replying to everyone.