Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2014 7:34 PM Title: 01:00/The Dancer

Not bad. Most peoples first stories don't even have paragraphs so that puts you a tier above the usual first time author.

You also have a good grasp of the giantess fantasy itself. I can see you worked hard on this.

Also...

"I’m going to be a doctor! I’m a med student… or, rather, I was before the quarantine anyway.”

“Ugh, I was really hoping you were a professional stripper.”

“Why’s that?”

“Because it would have made this less difficult.”

This little bit of witty dialogue here was pretty cool.

Good day sir and good luck in your future writing endevors