Date: July 11 2014 2:39 AM Title: Arell's Remorse
... Please continue this. It's way too good to just leave hanging. You need to finish it! Aside from Kevin's comments (no offense, but so far in all three segments of this story, I have never liked Kevin. He's exceedingly annoying in my mind. I respect that he's trying to connect with Arell here, but he still doesn't seem mature enough to grasp the seriousness of the situation for the most part, to the point where he doesn't seem to realize that his life is in very legitimate danger at some points in the story), this story has been nothing short of absolutely gripping for me. The raw tension, the plot, the characters, and their relationships are all fleshed out, and you've left me curious as to how exactly Avakonian human society works, as well as their relationship with other species. You can't, and I mean CAN'T, just leave this story to sit here collecting dust. Regardless... I'll be waiting for your next update. Good luck to ya!
Jarl of the North
P.S. - As much as I can see his point, Stark is not going to help issues with the Avakonian humans with his current hostile attitude. They'll likely ignore his points and take him as proof that Earth humans are hostile - threats to each other and everything around them. I guess the others could try dubbing him over with voice clips of Red vs. Blue's Sarge, but as funny as that would be, I doubt that would actually help...
[Report This]Date: May 26 2014 7:07 AM Title: Arell's Remorse
Is this story going to be updated any time soon? I really want to see where this story goes?
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 8:44 AM Title: Arell's Remorse
That was nice at the end there. That's the sort of break through this story needed.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 1:18 AM Title: Arell's Remorse
I LOVE IT! I don't know what it is about this whole situation, but I gotta say this: Arell feel like one of the most genuine characters I've read about on this site! Maybe, its that at one point she really WAS the villan. Maybe its that we, as readers, got to experience how brutal and cruel she was first hand, instead of getting a mere flashback like in most stories. Whatever it is, it worked, it makes her character feel so real and 3-dimensional.
Like Stark says, it's still up in the air whether her change is true or not, but from what she's said and the things that have happened before, I can say that (even if she were lying) I feel more symphathy for Arell than any other character I've read about on this site...Truly, Arell makes this series! Props to you, sir/ma'am, I love this series and I wish there were more people reading, your stories deserve more recognition!