Reviews For The Voodoo Doll
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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. I wish it went on a little longer and that Sarah toyed with Jack a little more.

Dave

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool one-shot...  I'd like to see this continued!  Very nice! ;`)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

A cool concept.

Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was a fresh twist on the genre.  The events had a nice logical flow that made me want to see what came next, and the grammar/construction was all neat and tidy.  If anything, I'd have been interested to see the story go on a little longer with Sarah experimenting with the doll before she did what she did, but the dark tone of that ending worked well given how short the story is.  Overall, a very solid piece here; well done.

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