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Reviewer: Prodi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

I like your stories and am still reading...

Don't let you the lack of reviews discourage you, some people simply don't write reviews and there's probably a bunch of unregistered lurkers reading, too :)

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

Just found this. What a fantastic story. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Aaron

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I´m sorry for my language.

No puedo esperar por el siguiente capítulo, en serio que me tienes amarrado con esta historia, solo puedo imaginar lo que Julia, o cualquier otra persona (con o sin concentimiento de Julia) le haran a Nick y/o a los buggies (se que sueno un poco sádico pero es el entuciasmo hablando por mi).

No quiero sonar desesperado (y vaya que lo estoy) pero, con toda la admiración, respeto y gratitud de un lector a su escritor, por favor (de rodillas, palmas juntas, brazos extendidos y rostro suplicante) DATE PRISA.

: )

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

Its kinda hard to feel bad for Nick and Sam when they came to this hellhole universe of their own accord! The native buggies of this universe have been squished for fun, eaten, ripped apart, and all other manner of horrors with no choice in the matter...Its REALLY easy to feel sorry for them even when they are just fodder.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good stuff with Julie.

Reviewer: keithy159 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

Cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have a question.

Is it will take next chapter?

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

Think Jasmine realizes that the daycare she leaves her daughter at serves up buggies as snacks? I'd think she'd be a little upset at that fact.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I´ll be happy as a clam if there is any action with the toddlers. For what I saw in the last chapter maybe they are going to eat the buggys for snack?it would be cool to have them being played as toys, tossedin the diapers or child´s underwear or something.

Reviewer: edgehead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great series!

Reviewer: edgehead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope kitty gets a snack

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

Kinda of want this world to see more of that soccer team now. 

Reviewer: Voreman123 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

More more more! Let's get some action going.... Bring on the buggieesss!!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Who's Amanda?

Author's Response:

Thanks didn't noticed I put Amanda instead fo Annabel.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Figures this would happen. I still have NO idea why the decided to come back to such a dangerous universe!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yes, jasmine is back, and as gentle as ever although the same could not be said for her kids so far.

Reviewer: poptant Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Any chance on finishing this?

Reviewer: reversehero Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

im leaning to the narnia rules where a life time there is 4 years here in the story sam said her parents FREAKED after a few hours they where in that world at least two weeks i dadus THAT is jasmine 20 years down her life and that cat is cupcake II 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

If my theory is correct, that would be a fucking amazing story.

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh My God!

Here we go..... Again! Yeah!

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