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Reviewer: Kiefer Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

I did like the part when they where trapped in Macy's diaper

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

Just found this. What a fantastic story. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Aaron

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

Its kinda hard to feel bad for Nick and Sam when they came to this hellhole universe of their own accord! The native buggies of this universe have been squished for fun, eaten, ripped apart, and all other manner of horrors with no choice in the matter...Its REALLY easy to feel sorry for them even when they are just fodder.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good stuff with Julie.

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