Reviews For Back to the Universe
Reviewer: larkpie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Date: March 22 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Pretty great stuff, toddler giants are exceedingly rare, and this is one of the best pieces with them I've seen. I do wish the angle had been explored from the children's perspective a bit more, putting a bit more discription on the feeling of "buggies" in their diapers rather than just "enjoying the experience", but that's a minor nitpick.
Overall it was pretty good, and I'd be very curious to see if you have anything more like it.
Reviewer: Kiefer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Date: May 21 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
I sure liked that part drowning in a baby's pee