Date: October 12 2018 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Very glad Linsey survived. That was a pretty harrowing rescue and it's good to know that Barbara is a trustworthy ally. Also nice to see that Danielle is not as heartless as she seemed (I wonder if that was in response to my earlier reviews. Nice redemption for her in any case).
And now there's a third tiny person? One with a vore fetish at that. Interesting. Her sister didn't seem too concerned. Is this a regular thing for Evie?
Author's Response: I wanted to leave it a little vague as to whether or not her sister saw the whole thing. She may not know where Evie is currently.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2018 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Fantastic chapter. Super relieved that Linsey is ok, I was literally on the edge of my seat the past few chapters! Glad to know that Barbara can be undoubtedly trusted with the safety of the tiny women.
Cool to see two new figures added to the mix, Evie and Evelyn. I love how when Lilith choked and accidentally swallowed Evie, she was totally panicked yet Evie herself was having the time of her life LMAO. So funny and so hot. Wait till Evie finds out there's another passenger inside Lilith's gut...
All in all I'm excited for what comes next, and unfortunately I know how long it will be until it comes lol xD Solid work man.