Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 10:52 PM Title: Nap Time is Over

Interesting story so far, I mean interesting in a good way. But it's like a story in the Bermuda triangle.

Don't have much to say yet but I really did like that sentence toward the end. "Walking towards each one another despite still being far away."

Keep up the good writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! I appreciate the feed back.