[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 10:10 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
To character-Ok first think Natalie, your logic is flawed a bra cannot be found at the bottom of the lake if it is floating.
To author- I don't think the girl should be aware of them till later, by having the trio(mainly Natalie ) try to avoid contact with the Titan sized female it might add some suspense to the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, by the time I'm reading this the next chapter is already written though, make sure to review the next one to get your ideas in, thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 2:55 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
Well good chapter. For ideas I going to try and throw some at you now. You could have a huge storm separating everyone, but Natalie and Aren find each other. And Michael is injured and found by that other girl. And she helps him back to health.
Using that storm idea you could all so introduce other characters that washed up on the island. Or have there be other giant girls beside the two we know about all ready.
There just ideas.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, its and pieces are currently in use as I write
Date: January 20 2014 1:36 PM Title: Love Lost and Love Found
Cool chapter, seems like the end of Act 1. The group has reached a solid dynamic (still with issues to play with) and they see their next big mystery.
I'll be curious as to what caused Natalie to grow and the stranger to grow even more. At first I thought that this would mean that Natalie would continue to grow, but if the stranger's bra is larger than Natalie then the stranger probably reached her present mega-height right away. We'll see.
Author's Response:
It's true, both of there's was instant, but there may be a little more growing due to a certain something