[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 2:48 AM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I was thinking about them running into or starting out as just two green eyes in the night seen by one of the boys or by Natalie followed by seeing what look to be a huge cat like paw print with the shape of a human foot with only four tows.
Latter on they see what made the print and the eyes belong to. It would be maybe a bit smaller than Natalie around 40 feet or so, it would be a cat boy around 20 or so but looks older than the three of them.
Long dark hair and fur with a long tail and sharp claws and teeth and those green cat like eyes.
He could be friends with that other girl that is being talked about. I was thinking about having him being taller than Natalie but i don't think you will be ok with it so i went with a size that was giant than the boys but a bit smaller than Natalie.
I hope that gives you some help on the story.
I don't know what happened to my post, i have some ideas to what happened to it and am hoping its not the worst thing that happened to it.
But i do hope for a reply, even if it telling me the idea is no good.
I was giving you some help as you asked.
Author's Response:
Yah I don't really see that happening, but I really do appreciate the suggestion and the effort put into writing that out.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2014 12:15 AM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I don't know what mechanism you used to make Natalie grow, so its hard for me to make suggestions. And I'm not sure if its just her size that's affecting her behavior or if the same catalyst that caused her growth is affecting that as well. My suggestion for now is to keep the tension between Michael and the other two. Keep the gentleness and affection between her and Aren.
Again not knowing the source of her growth, I could suggest that there's something special about the island that causes females to grow and that Natalie. You maybe you could throw in a native tribe that has had to adapt to larger women and smaller men. And maybe even turn it into a New World Order story eventually with an growth "infected"Natalie bringing the secret to growth back to civilization with her. Then Michael would have to confront the fact that even if he got away from Natalie, all women would be growing and he'd have to change his attitude or else.
Good story and I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the suggestion, I like the idea of a tribe. As far as reasons ago I just kinda thought to myself it would be magic or maybe the electic shock that happened way earlier.
Date: January 17 2014 11:07 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well in my case, my review requests always centre around wanting to see some giantess vore. In other words, beautiful women putting (preferably younger) guys into their mouthes, and swallowing them whole. Not that I'd want to go all the way down in real life, but the fantasy's fun.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 11:03 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
I can tell Michael is screwed next chapter. But I feel like im on team Michael. Maybe you can have the direction of the story where they both little dudes continue to fight and try to win Natalie's heart. Just an idea so far.
No I don't think you needed to write out Natalie's hunt; unless your planning a huge twist in the story.
Maybe you could tell what happened on the hunt and find that captain. Could be barely alive or dead.
Just some ideas, but I like the story so far. And how you update frequently, keep up the awesome writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Team Michael, haha, I love it.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 10:59 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well her hunt probably should have been written to add more emphasis to the whole difficulty of survival. But I don't think it would have been all that interesting to read, I mean one snap of her fingers and the poor animal's head would no longer exist.
This is just me but with a nice big lake on this island I think a certin giant girl deserves a bath...with one or two pituclar peeping toms. But that's just me my favorite scenes in giantess stories are bath scenes. They're my one weakness to my principal of plot before fetish.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the suggestion ;) Taken into consideration.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 10:25 PM Title: Finding Supplies and Arguing Guys
Well Michael deserves what is coming, he has been dragging everyone down with his stubborness, Natalie needs to set him right. At least Aren, though he isn't contributing much at least accepts his follower role and doesn't cause trouble.
You should have Michael get so frustrated with them that he runs off on his own and then Natalie and Aren have to look for him. Michael will probably run into something the same size as Natalie or even bigger. Could be another giantess, something big like a T-Rex or even an undiscovered tribe.
Author's Response:
I was thinking of adding another giantess and a T-Rex coming one of these chapters but never imagined him running away. See this is what keeps n00bs going! Thanks to much!