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Reviewer: Story smith Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 1:54 PM Title: Michael's Mess

I think there should be some other girl one the island as well as Natalie that lives on the island. Maybe she could also want the two boys because she has never seen one before? And tries to take them from Natalie

Author's Response:

That is for sure taken into consideration, a very interesting idea. How old do you picture the native girl?

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