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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 2:59 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

Hoo-boy! I can think of only two things that might be the source of their dumbfounded amazement. Either Corey is mysteriously growing to Alpha size...or he's going to become this parallel Earth's first Gamma-class person.

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 7:50 AM Title: Retreat - Part 1

Sounds like some ominous premonitions this chapter, I guess it could be a few things. It could be Suicide, or a stubborn action that Corey is doing for Melody, or even a dark and twisted action that may show us more of Corey's recently damaged psyche. I hope to see this cliff-hanger resolved.



Author's Response:

Could be any number of things, sadly :(. We'll have to see in the next post. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Reviewer: wwebby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 5:07 AM Title: Retreat - Part 1

Aw, Corey and Melody. <3



Author's Response:

<3 indeed :3. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 4:33 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

Great to see it back.



Author's Response:

Glad to have it back :). Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 3:37 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

I would certainly enjoy more Corey/Melody alone time! Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the update to this story and that side story by Jacksmith too!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, hope I can continue to deliver. Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 1:56 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

Thanks for the update. This is my favorite out of the series. Maybe because it's the original. Anyways glad to see a chapter with Corey in it. And seeing his healing progression and his new developed relationship.

Author's Response:

And thank you for the comments - both this one, and the one you left somewhat recently that I just saw. They're very appreciated :)

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 12:38 PM Title: Retreat - Part 1

I almost thought this series was dead. Nice to see it back. 



Author's Response:

Not quite dead! Not yet!

Also nice to see you back. I haven't seen you anywhere else in quite a while so I was honestly concerned something may have happened.

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