[Report This]Date: May 13 2015 9:14 AM Title: Visiting Hours
This is still my favorite chapter. It's written really good. The emotion gets me every time.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2015 1:12 AM Title: Visiting Hours
This is still my favorite chapter. It's written really good. The emotion gets me every time.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2014 11:13 PM Title: Visiting Hours
Well I'm hooked to this story. I love the size difference,also the loving relationship of Corey and Claire.
I bet that Claire won't be able to keep her emotions in check. While she disciplining those girls.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2014 4:27 PM Title: Visiting Hours
One question answered so many other questions raised. As others have pointed out the biggest of which is what are the Omega is the biggest (no pun intended), clearly not natural but that only narrows it down so much.
Then you have the more character centric mysteries, what drove Naomi to attack in the first place, how did on earth does a Beta/Omega marriage work, and just what does Dr. Everett have planned?
I'll definitely be following this for all the answers.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2014 4:17 PM Title: Visiting Hours
I am now hooked on this story. This chapter was perfect. I love seeing the scale difference combined with tenderness. Nice bit of remorse and forgiveness there. I hope it continues to develop. And nice of the brother's part with that last warning. I'm with him, wanting to know more on this secret project.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2014 10:08 AM Title: Visiting Hours
Naomi enjoying torturing Corey the most (at least from his perspective) is unsettling. I wonder what’s up with that.
Omegas seem to be genetically altered to interact with Beta’s if Claire can see Corey in detail and feel his touch. I do too wonder if Claire was born naturally or made into an Omega. It’s uncommon seeing gentle micro interaction and I feel you pulled it off well. Claire is not the common mega giantess, that’s for sure. If Corey’s father is a beta their family dynamic must have been very interesting.
Author's Response:
I'll be taking a nice, hard look at Naomi in the next chapter. I'll just say that the pain wasn't what she was getting off on, and that Claire was paying a lot of attention to her in chapter 3.
[Report This]Date: January 13 2014 3:29 AM Title: Visiting Hours
I would like to know a little bit more about the Omegas are they grown or made bigger? Why can they can see in greater detail by magnifying their vision? Is Omegas only women or are there male Omegas as well?
I will look forward to the next update on the story.
Author's Response:
I'll go ahead and say that there are some things I'll touch on but won't reveal in this story. Have to leave some hooks for future projects, after all!
I will confirm that there are male Omegas. They won't really be involved in the general sentences of the girls, but they'll be around in other capacities.
Date: January 13 2014 2:00 AM Title: Visiting Hours
This is a very interesting story. I love the idea of a multi-size society where the biggest are the peacekeepers. Very unique. It's also quite different and refreshing in this genre to see the violent characters get a comeuppance and maybe even start to regret their actions. Intrigued to see where this is going.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
One thing that's always been a point of curiosity for me in the community is how little the people being abused by a larger woman tend to deserve it, and that was one of the two things that sparked the premise for this: Three people did an awful thing, and in doing so attracted a much bigger fish. The other was a violent giantess regretting her actions after commiting them, but still having to pay the price for that moral failing, both mentally and physically.
Glad you're intrigued, and hope you continue to enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2014 11:12 PM Title: Visiting Hours
This is a good chapter, really adds to the story and it really fleshes out Claire a lot, puts her in a brighter light in case you have her go overboard with the discipline.
I like their relationship, it is a very healthy sibling relationship and it is interesting to know that the Omegas exist not because of evolution but because of science, I am curious to know what their mother is working on, something to stop this from ever happening again?
Claire really loves him and it is interesting that she doesn't like the size disparity, perhaps it out of love that she finds it unfair that she gets to be so big and her beloved brother was made too small to defend himself.
I would say it would be to shrink offenders permanently or something to enlarge a Beta until it is big enough to avoid such a mishap again.
I want to see more, you have a fan here, keep going and I am fine with slower productivity, perhaps you could do weekly updates? It seems a short enough time frame to keep readers hooked and long enough to write but it is just a suggestion.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments.
What they're working on will be revealed in time. I'm actually planning on an Interlude after this upcoming round of disciplinary chapters that will take us over to Claire's mother, and also introduce Dr. Everett who is very, very important to this universe and I'm looking forward to writing her. As a little bit of a teaser, I'll say that this is because I enjoy characters that are good people, but not necessarily NICE people.
On the relationship between Corey and Claire, I'm glad to see you liked it. This chapter spent a lot of time being reread by me because I was worried about crossing the line of a platonic, familial relationship, and I'm glad no one seems to feel that it did.
This upcoming chapter will also delve into Claire's side of her hatred of the size disparity, as she shares some things Corey isn't necessarily aware of.
Hope you continue to enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: January 12 2014 10:34 PM Title: Visiting Hours
I'm really enjoying this story so more Naomi is fine with me.