[Report This]Date: April 13 2014 7:51 PM Title: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt. 1
An interesting chapter. I find myself wondering what the camera wound up playing but I'm guessing that's gonna come in later. That aside the chapter was nicely paced and kept my attention til the end. I didn't notice any problems aside from maybe a couple minor grammar things.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Well, looks like I'm doing a good job. Thanks for stopping by Asterisk
[Report This]Date: April 12 2014 8:10 PM Title: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt. 1
Feel kind of bad for the woman being locked in a male prison then having that happen to her but a solid story all around.
Author's Response:
The prison itself wasn't exclusively for men. Though I imagine that the facilities would have been separate for obvious reasons.
Also don't feel too bad. Her death was practically painless compared to some of the other ones. At least Cynthia didn't get a hold of her, she would've been screwed then.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2014 8:19 PM Title: The Brutal Art of Blackmail Pt. 1
Just read all 6 ch.'s, straight through. This is extremely good! I like the desciptions you come up with, and the shifting scenes as you switch around between them. The way that you've set this up, makes the possiblitys limitless...
Fantastic work Man! Love it!
Author's Response:
This review made my day. Nobody has ever admitted to reading one of my stories straight through, and I wanted to let you know that your review meant a lot.
I'm extremely pleased that you enjoyed it and I look foward to hearing from you in future chapters.