Reviews For The Perfect Woman
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Reviewer: Jacksmith Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 7:53 AM Title: Man's Best Friend

This is a nice start.  You do a good job of keeping the unaware angle light and playful.  There are some spelling/grammar mistakes around that might be worth cleaning up, and sometimes the verb tenses don't match up, but overall this is a decent way to jump into your tale.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'll keep that in mind as I go forward and try to improve!

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