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Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 7:00 PM Title: Eerie Building with a Side of Comeuppance

I will admit the first chapter I read I wasn't sure what to think since your writing style was different than anything else but in a good way.

 

Next I must say you have great diction through the entire collection of the chapters. I don't recall you repeating a descriptive word at all so nothing became stale which obviously is great.

 

My last point is that I really want to see this next chapter I  have a feel the next chapter is going to be the best I love suspense in a story

 

I will be reading 

-Chloe

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 8:45 PM Title: Eerie Building with a Side of Comeuppance

I'd watch baseball/softball a lot more if these were the stakes.

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