Reviews For A daycare story
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Reviewer: sickpuppies Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 7:57 PM Title: dirty diapers

I have to say that this is amazing!  I love ever part of it.  Keep up the good work. 

Reviewer: Lumberpanda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2013 2:36 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage

Great story so far. Have her get thrown out with the diaper but then be able to break free and escape her way out of the diaper pail. Maybe a vore ending?

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2013 7:41 PM Title: dirty diapers

I'm honestly not sure if I'm disturbed/disgusted or if I enjoy this... Well, so long as there's nothing sexual I'll still be moderately on board.

Author's Response:

Yo, I totally get if someone isn't into this =) People have different preferences and sometimes you come along and find something that other people enjoy but you think that it just isn't you cup of tea. Just look up a topic that you do like =)

Reviewer: Black Cock Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2013 8:40 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage

Ok, how's this: Alyssa is in billy's poop and before billy gets changed, Billy finds Alyssa and decides to clean his toy. Billy grabs alyssa and then places her inside his mouth to clean her. Inside Billy's mouth, she is being tasted by billy's tongue and spit out. Billy then gets distracted and leaves alyssa.

Reviewer: Black Cock Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 8:25 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage

AWESOME! Please don't stop!!! next, have alyssa escape the poop, and have betty capture her. or have alyssa fall inside Thomas' juice box and have thomas swallow her. you could probably either have her fall in paste, which then micheal eats her or taster her inside his mouth. these are only opinions, but please keep going!!!!

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2013 7:44 PM Title: dirty diapers

Awwww you are such a sweetie u3u

I would love if when the baby is going to be changed, she is almost rescued, but then the baby remembers her, and takes her out, for maybe to play and/or share with his friends maybe? Just an idea x3

Author's Response:

So an almost rescue dashed by the baby retrieving her before she is noticed? Then mistreated (played) with again by him and his friends. I'll see what i can do.

Reviewer: Basement Hubby Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2013 4:36 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage


Keep shining on, you creepy-ass pedophiles you!

Reviewer: sean9321 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2013 9:05 AM Title: Daycare shrinkage

Oh my god , more fast , please this is officially my favourite story on this site.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 5:41 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage

Great story some spelling errors but still understandable. Ido find the story a little shaky/jumpy. I think there could be more details.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2013 1:13 PM Title: Daycare shrinkage

Oh my god. You just made my day. I honestly never thinked that anyone was going to make the challenge, and its even better than its you. I love tales of a shrinking sister, so, its just perfect.

So far I love it. It do feels s little rushed, but its really good. The little toddlers are adorable, and I love the descriptions you make, and your writing style. I have no complains, please go on. Im loving it. And as a little side note, im a she not a he xD

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoy my story. I haven't been writing in a little while so I decided to kill two birds with one stone by writing my first challenge while simultaneously sharpening my pen. I'm also happy to here that you have enjoyed previous stories of mine, so thankyou. Sorry for miswriting your gender, it has been corrected. Don't forget, if you want anything to happen in this story then just ask me. It is your sory after all =) 

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