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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 7: MAKING THE MOST OF HER KITCHEN

"As far as she knows..."

Bwa-hahahahahahahahaha!

;-D

Author's Response:

 I feel honoured to have once again been the recipient of the Carycomic Bwa-hahahhahahhhahha award. Well whether or not she ever finds out can be up to the shrunken man. In fact that's covered  in the next chapter called "Follow up to being swallowed up."

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: MAKING THE MOST OF HER KITCHEN

Whoa, the 'cooking-part' sounds a little bit dangerous!  Although, a night spent snuggling would be a most- desireable situation....

I just can't get into the swallowing.  Everything leading up to it, YES!  Although, the constant threat of it lingering within your mind, as to 'if' she might decide to just casually take you, without you knowing...well. that in itself is very exciting!

The death part is what ruins it for me.... :=|



Author's Response:

I agree, and that's why it's important for all shrinking men to have a teleporter with a recall factor. That's why I gave the book the particular pun title I chose (adapted from "How to succeed in business without really trying."

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